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Post subject: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:01 am
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Think of her eyes
the sparkle of excitement as she awakens you with her gaze
her face, forehead brow nose
how her lips curl upward as she reaches for your kiss
how her hair falls against her cheeks and down her neck
her body, its curves
the way she walks towards you, her legs
her scent, as she brushes against you
like she is telling your nose that she wants your touch
and as her arms hold you to her
in loves sweetest caress
this memory will last
yes it will, last.

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:11 am
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I can tell that's poetry, because the writing doesn't go all the way across the page.


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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:39 am
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Triton Thrasher wrote:
I can tell that's poetry, because the writing doesn't go all the way across the page.


try this;
Think, of her eyes, the sparkle of excitement as she awakens you with her gaze, her face, forehead, brow, nose, how her lips curl upward as she reaches for your kiss, how her hair falls against her cheeks and down her neck, her body, its curves, how she walks towards you, her legs, her scent as she brushes against you, like she is telling your nose that she wants your touch, and, as her arms hold you to her, in loves sweetest caress, this memory will last, yes it will, last.

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:48 am
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Nice stuff SBLS. There is a small group of people on this forum that, to me, seem to be intelligent and have a great attitude. You are one of them.

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:53 am
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Wow! I need to go pull one off!


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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:40 pm
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Nice one Solid B. 8)

Now own up. It's all that practice you've had on the 'five word story game' is'nt it? :lol:
Keep 'em coming mate, it's good stuff.

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 1:06 pm
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Think, of her eyes
the sparkle of excitement as she awakens you with her gaze
her face
forehead, brow, nose
how her lips curl upward as she reaches for your kiss
how her hair falls against her cheeks and down her neck
her body
its curves
how she walks towards you
her legs
her scent as she brushes against you
like
she is telling your nose that she wants your touch
and
as her arms hold you to her
in loves sweetest caress
this memory will last
, yes it will
, last
+1....nice stuff

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 3:31 pm
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Bros, thanks.
Rhumba, you play the 5-word game as much :lol: so I know that you know Bro :lol:
there once was a lad named Rhumba
in a guitar battle for sure he could thump ya
then he broke a high string
and said "don't mean a thing, because on rhythm I'll swing"
at songs end the crowd shouted
"we love ya"

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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Bros, thanks.
Rhumba, you play the 5-word game as much :lol: so I know that you know Bro :lol:
there once was a lad named Rhumba
in a guitar battle for sure he could thump ya
then he broke a high string
and said "don't mean a thing, because on rhythm I'll swing"
at songs end the crowd shouted
"we love ya"


Top's Solid 8) 8)


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ripitup555 wrote:
Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Bros, thanks.
Rhumba, you play the 5-word game as much :lol: so I know that you know Bro :lol:
there once was a lad named Rhumba
in a guitar battle for sure he could thump ya
then he broke a high string
and said "don't mean a thing, because on rhythm I'll swing"
at songs end the crowd shouted
"we love ya"


Top's Solid 8) 8)


Thanks Solid bro, you're the man,
No one does it like you can,
The meanest man here on a bass,
Aiin't no disputing it, you're the ace. :D

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:06 pm
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Rhumba wrote:


Thanks Solid bro, you're the man,
No one does it like you can,
The meanest man here on a bass,
Aiin't no disputing it, you're the ace. :D


A band of brothers
on Fenders Forums are we
fighting the good fight
by using the good thoughts
for all the world, musically
lets keep playing guitars
and singing the songs
rock and roll, the blues, outlaw country
so a better place
this our world, it will be

Thanks Rhumba 8)

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:42 pm
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When the line continues on the next line, its called enjambment :D (that's my A in English coming in there)

How about this,

Fatty and skinny went to bed,
Fatty rolled over and skinny was dead :-b


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martynrss2 wrote:
When the line continues on the next line, its called enjambment :D (that's my A in English coming in there)

How about this,

Fatty and skinny went to bed,
Fatty rolled over and skinny was dead :-b


enjambment, oh dear.
completed thoughts, should be clear.
if thoughts run on too long
without a break or a song
the reader may get sleepy i fear.

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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:02 pm
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Very witty my friend 8)


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away from the rest
its just a big problen
where will it go now
swept from the rocks into the sea
its not my fauly
its a plan to go and reach
get it away
he wont give up without 2 trys

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