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Post subject: New demo, need critique
Posted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 10:20 pm
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Yo. Wrote a song yesterday with a friend/singer. We recorded it on the spot so we wouldn't forget about it, but I think what came out of the recording was pretty cool. He improvised the lyrics on the spot, I came up with the riffs and melody.
It's in drop C. Not a usual tuning for me. I'm fairly certain it wasn't precise cause of the heat yesterday anyway, lol. What do you think? Would another passage suit it?
http://soundcloud.com/edcetrul/flickering-light

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Post subject: Re: New demo, need critique
Posted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 10:44 pm
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Not my style of music. so i can't really critique it fairly

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Post subject: Re: New demo, need critique
Posted: Sun Feb 09, 2014 11:01 pm
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It's pretty cool, but it needs some other passages to make it a song, and some work on the lyrics.
Keep on writing man!


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Post subject: Re: New demo, need critique
Posted: Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:10 am
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Cool sounds Riley. 8) Thanks for posting. Not sure about another passage but a rhythm section might add something to the mix lol. :D

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