Well ....... it's not my taste but taste is a personal thing.

You played the licks really good.
The sound is rough and a bit gritty.
Some timing issues but you manage to get back into the beat (I definitely couldn't do better at this speed!! )
Since it is just a rock style SAMPLE, I guess it was intention not to have breaks and fills in the drum pattern!?
Besides the timing issues, the entire sample seems to me as if your accentuation was one bar early throughout the whole thing?? Was that done on purpose? What I mean is: you tap your foot and expect the guitar to kick in on 1-2-3-4-1!! ....but you kick in at 4. Dunno how to explain in English. Get what I mean?

I would have wished to have more melody lines in the guitar solo. There were some interesting licks though.

I REALLY liked your whammy bar action!! It sounded like a formula 1 racing car shifting gear.
That was really cool and well done!

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Kindest regards from Germany, Dee
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