Been playing around a good bit lately. Thought I'd share.

I don't edit my tracks so you will catch a few bad notes. My apologies. I don't mind constructive criticism. Still got lots to learn.

http://soundcloud.com/jackdragbean

Pretty nice, Jack!
I like the "Overdriven Blues" best.

There's one thing which I noticed in every song of yours: it kinda gets monotone after a while.
Maybe you might wanna experiment with song construction. You know .... verse, bridge, chorus ......

In each song I kinda miss building up tension, there's no "climax" .... it kinda ripples along without changing expression, know what I mean??
I don't mean it unfriendly, I hope you don't get me wrong.
It's just my impression when listening.

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Didn't take it wrong. I agree actually. One of the things I've noticed myself. I do believe lack of skill, and lack of licks in my head have something to do with it.. Really need to learn more vocabulary if you know what I mean. I'll try to think more construction-wise too so the tracks will have a little more rhyme and reason. Thanks. I appreciate the comment.