http://soundcloud.com/riley1/untitled-song

could be better but meh

delay is directly through my amp. no distortion (obviously). i guess my laptop didn't pick up the ringing out in the solo.

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riley

oh and what specific genre would you consider it?

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riley

The main rhythm part kinda reminded me of Kings of Leon. I'd call it soft rock. IMHO playing a blues lead does not make it a blues song. Throw some lyrics on top of it and you might be able to turn into something.

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Tune Low, Play Hard & Floor it!

i chucked in lyrics the day i wrote it, i just couldn't be bothered to sing them

soft rock eh? interesting. i played it for my music teachers, they consider it to be simple/soft bluesy kinda thing.

please more critisizm welcome!

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riley

Soft rock or possibly some type of alt rock, depending on the percussion you would add.

Main riff was kinda cool Riley the lead parts seemed broken up, if you layed the lead parts on top of the riff it would have tied it together, don't know what recording gear you have, I'm not up to scratch with all the recording side of things you should look at some loopers, loop the main riff then play on top of it great bits of kit

you added some cool sounds to your library, make it into a song or use it to augment some of your other cool riff's in a song. just noticed that you are over 4K posts, congrats Riley!

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you can save the world with your guitar one love song at a time it's just better, more fun, easier with a fender solid body electric guitar or electric bass guitar.

I don,t know what you would consider it. It could be many things but Your getting better. Keep it up kid.

Reminds me of "The Motels"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Motels

Way before your time...

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"You can't spend what you ain't got, you can't lose what you ain't never had" ~ McKinley Morganfield

if only we lived on the same block! THATS GREAT! keep it up! THATS HOW ALL MY SONGS STARTED OUT.

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