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Post subject: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 2:01 am
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http://soundcloud.com/riley1/untitled-song

could be better but meh

delay is directly through my amp. no distortion (obviously). i guess my laptop didn't pick up the ringing out in the solo.

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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:07 am
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oh and what specific genre would you consider it?

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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:06 am
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The main rhythm part kinda reminded me of Kings of Leon. I'd call it soft rock. IMHO playing a blues lead does not make it a blues song. Throw some lyrics on top of it and you might be able to turn into something.

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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 5:00 am
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i chucked in lyrics the day i wrote it, i just couldn't be bothered to sing them :lol:

soft rock eh? interesting. i played it for my music teachers, they consider it to be simple/soft bluesy kinda thing.

please more critisizm welcome! 8)

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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:49 am
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Soft rock or possibly some type of alt rock, depending on the percussion you would add.


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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:12 am
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Main riff was kinda cool Riley the lead parts seemed broken up, if you layed the lead parts on top of the riff it would have tied it together, don't know what recording gear you have, I'm not up to scratch with all the recording side of things you should look at some loopers, loop the main riff then play on top of it great bits of kit


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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:29 am
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you added some cool sounds to your library, make it into a song or use it to augment some of your other cool riff's in a song. just noticed that you are over 4K posts, congrats Riley!

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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:34 pm
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I don,t know what you would consider it. It could be many things but Your getting better. Keep it up kid.


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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 4:17 pm
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Reminds me of "The Motels"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Motels

Way before your time...

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Post subject: Re: untitled bluesy type song
Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 5:32 pm
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if only we lived on the same block! :lol: THATS GREAT! keep it up! :D THATS HOW ALL MY SONGS STARTED OUT. :wink:

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