The ex-girlfriend saga continues, and I wrote another song. I'm really looking for feedback on this one; it's got more of a country feel than I usually do, so I'm not sure about it quite yet.

I've been really focusing on lyrics lately. Good lyrics can make a good song great and bad lyrics can ruin a great song, so it's an area of songwriting I really try to work on.

Let me know what you think guys!

"I'll See You Again"
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yyqGHPfn ... ideo_title

Lyrics:

Go take a mountaintop
Put in your dreams
'Cause I'm climbing every stone
All the way to you from me
And don't you try to sympathize
'Cause I know every word behind those eyes
And don't you try to say it right
No, I'll be walking with the moon tonight

What am I to do

If I just can't stop loving you
Don't know what to say
If I did maybe things would go a different way
But I know, yeah I know, and I know, yeah I know
But I know
That I'll see you again

Go take a shooting star
Put it in your sky
'Cause I've wished on every one
And dear, I'm running out of tries
Talk about love like it's just a game
But winners, losers, it's all the same
Talk about love like you understand
It's like searching for diamonds in the sand

So I'll take the bitter taste
Wash it down with wine
Then I'll fill this empty glass
And try again a second time
You talk about me like I'm just a ghost
Then you raise your glass for one more toast
You talk about me like I'm in the past
So you better just drink it fast

Reads like Dashboard Confessional. Can't watch the vidja, YouTube is blocked here in hell.

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Oh, that's a shame. You can listen to it here as well: http://jandrew.bandcamp.com

I've never listened to that band, so I don't know if that's a good thing or not.

Save the music loose the girl. Keep singing like that and you'll have several young ladies nibbling at the bate. Try a little smile, and get rid of that serious look in your eye.

really liked it. good job.