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Post subject: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 3:06 pm
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Thingas look like they are slowing down for a bit. can wee write a fue rimes?
I will start.


"SUNSHINE"
When the sun comes out in Phenix, does it shine inTennessee,does it shine in Alabama, or in Kentucky, is it shining in Washington,out on Puget Sound,and does it shine in New,Mexico in Albicurkey, and when the sun goes down, is it dark all over this land, and if its dark here is it dark in Japan, and does the whole world get dark at the same time, or does the whole world go around the sun, and noplace is the same, and when it gets dark wee have the sun to blame, everyplace gets dark in its own sweet time, and the world keeps on moving, that's the purpose of this rime. :)


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Post subject: Re: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 4:00 pm
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"Ode to Femininity"

When roses are red, they're ready for pluckin'

When a girl finishes high school she's ready for...














COLLEGE! :lol: :lol: :lol:

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Post subject: Re: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 4:42 pm
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Martian wrote:
"Ode to Femininity"

When roses are red, they're ready for pluckin'

When a girl finishes high school she's ready for...

Martian, this is an open forum and not for adults only. not quite what I was thinking of.
Collogue: :roll: :roll: :roll: :roll:












COLLEGE! :lol: :lol: :lol:


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Post subject: Re: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 4:50 pm
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"Ode to Femininity-In America"

When roses are red, they're ready for pluckin'

When a girl finishes high school she's ready for nothin'

DISCLAIMER: No offense intended to all the hard working school teachers out there. You do a great job. I just needed to come up with a clean rhyme to finish Martian's poem. Nothin' was not the word I was originally thinking of when I read those lines of course ^^

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Post subject: Re: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 5:12 pm
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Capo wrote:
"Ode to Femininity-In America"

When roses are red, they're ready for pluckin'

When a girl finishes high school she's ready for nothin'

DISCLAIMER: No offense intended to all the hard working school teachers out there. You do a great job. I just needed to come up with a clean rhyme to finish Martian's poem. Nothin' was not the word I was originally thinking of when I read those lines of course ^^

Capo, Disclaimers dont count, you still made a sexualy provocative statment on an open forum ment for puplic use. Dont you get it, there are women and kids here all the time. :roll: :roll: :roll:


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Post subject: Re: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 6:25 pm
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Danny Duke wrote:
Capo, Disclaimers dont count, you still made a sexualy provocative statment on an open forum ment for puplic use. Dont you get it, there are women and kids here all the time. :roll: :roll: :roll:


There are women and kids here all the time..? Really? :|

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Post subject: Re: poetry and rime
Posted: Thu May 19, 2011 10:40 pm
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good one matrian. :D

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