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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 10:11 am
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awoke this morning counting,
blessings that have been mounting,
in my heart though not in order,
so, organize thought, I oughta.
then, other peoples voices,
not counting blessings,
counting other choices,
things they wouldn't or that didn't,
or, couldn't or that isn't.
not blessings or thoughts
that they did want to have,
better thoughts to think about
and to count as theirs,
a hug or kiss.
an expression of love.
the world's sun and moon,
shine from above,
turning around,
not turning down,
helps you keep steady
on the shaky ground,
of life's changing reality,
lets you change the sound,
vibrations if you will
in syncopation going round.
the critics voices seemed to mount,
self importance, critical mass now, on their count.
I know better's and me not you's,
to start the complaint departments views.
then I stopped to think about my count,
the blessings in a messy mount,
I had forgot to put in order,
so
I'd better get back to work
burnin daylight here 8)

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 4:37 am
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
awoke this morning counting,
blessings that have been mounting,
in my heart though not in order,
so, organize thought, I oughta.
then, other peoples voices,
not counting blessings,
counting other choices,
things they wouldn't or that didn't,
or, couldn't or that isn't.
not blessings or thoughts
that they did want to have,
better thoughts to think about
and to count as theirs,
a hug or kiss.
an expression of love.
the world's sun and moon,
shine from above,
turning around,
not turning down,
helps you keep steady
on the shaky ground,
of life's changing reality,
lets you change the sound,
vibrations if you will
in syncopation going round.
the critics voices seemed to mount,
self importance, critical mass now, on their count.
I know better's and me not you's,
to start the complaint departments views.
then I stopped to think about my count,
the blessings in a messy mount,
I had forgot to put in order,
so
I'd better get back to work
burnin daylight here 8)

i like it, do you just think of it as you type or is it written in a book from 6 months ago or something?

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 11:24 am
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Glad you like it Riley. So, yeah, I wrote that yesterday in a minute and then took over an hour of editing which is why at the end there is the line "I'd better get back to work, burnin daylight here".
I'm doing it again it seems :lol:
later Bro

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:14 pm
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Haiku Time:

A young man looked up
The stars looking down at him
Big picture moment.

The tea is steeping
The cat purring at my feet
Peaceful afternoon.

The mountain looms large
The hiker glances upward
The journey begins.

Flowers blowing now
In the rainy Spring breezes
Waiting for some sun.

Harvest time is here
Fall in the air, in the fields
Apples to be picked.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:29 pm
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I love it when you do that Fenderseeker09!

her eyebrow raised when I asked the question
the rouge on her lips glistened in the moonlight
she pressed her room key into my hand

we talked and walked toward the lighthouse
she said "a kiss can mean many things"
she touched my shoulder as she turned to face me

breathless our panting stopped
the sweat seemed to glue our bodies together
she climbed on top and whispered "again"
we were playing speed twister!lol :lol:

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 6:49 am
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Happy you like them SBLS!

The moonlight streaming
The light landing on the roof
Brilliant waterfall.

Snowflakes cascading
Each one unique, crafted thus
The skies are sparkling.

The eagle soaring
Up high above the treeline
Majestic and grand.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 10:22 pm
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Fenderseeker09, magician, a wonderful spell from your keyboard.

He said "this copyright protection is important"
"people can use your work without you knowing"
I said "Talent is a gift that keeps on giving, it evolves"

He then said " I wrote this great song last week"
"I think it could sell some, I'm not going to post it and have another person use it"
I said "that was last weeks song, talent unfolds, that forward push allows you to feel what lies ahead"

He said "last weeks song, what about this week?"
"and next week, these songs may be worth something"
I tried not to smile, he is such a good Bro, and said "don't worry you won't run out of material"

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 6:26 pm
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Thank you SBLS...here is another...

In the moonlit memory called the good old days
Snapshots flicker in a ticker-tape haze
Growing up, becoming that which you will be
Each moment only helping you see
That life is about more than money or fame
It is, in fact,like a nine-inning game
Sometimes you're the starting pitcher, the ace
Sometimes you're the closer just trying to wrap up the race
In each battle and in each test
You learn you can play among the best
Those memories from the past aren't photos at all
They're the foundation that make one stand tall
Look in the mirror the next time for real
That man or woman is the result of that great pottery wheel
Time pushes us on but it shapes us as well
From each event, some new story to tell
A photo is worth a thousand words they say
What picture will you paint today?

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 3:30 am
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post-poned tears
mind is shrinking thoughts are gaining
flowing from the below
decreasing in desolver bath
shivering as owls sleep
see the existence go forward

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 10:02 pm
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Fenderseeker09, radio_friendly_unit_shifter, Bros are riffin'

recovery today
from that wine and roses
downward slide of a weekend
after pretending the world is but a
never ending cocktail, with
a lot of pretty tails all around
rescued from my tumble by
my Brother singer, took a ride
to harmonize away those low down blues
him practicing for a gig on Friday
me for that gig unknown
felt good to vocalize and chill with my Bro
brought me back to here and now.
now if I could just think of a poem

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:15 am
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you feel your eyes
its not gonna stay
cant make a room
we'll build sugar
on its going to see the day
sea floor is light up like night

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:47 am
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Here's a Tender Poem I wrote for my better half on Valentines Day.

Darling,Darling,my true love,
When I tell you this,
Don't Hit Me.
I'd Love to Get Into Your Pants,
But I Know,They Wouldn't Fit Me.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:51 pm
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Me
Myself
Friends
People
Derealization
Actualization
Californiacation
Melodinization
DeathOfANation
Its All The Same
Everything
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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:57 am
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Wanted
one good guitar to play while you sing
to express suite solo's on songs shaded blue
tomorrow you'll choose but which guitar will it bring?
well, guitar wise i know this much is true
Texas
don't worry about a cotton picking thing
instead rock those blues like you always do
just pick those guitars strings, make them ring
and your next guitar will surely choose you. 8)

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 12:55 pm
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Wanted
one good guitar to play while you sing
to express suite solo's on songs shaded blue
tomorrow you'll choose but which guitar will it bring?
well, guitar wise i know this much is true
Texas
don't worry about a cotton picking thing
instead rock those blues like you always do
just pick those guitars strings, make them ring
and your next guitar will surely choose you. 8)

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