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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 2:20 am
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your tightning skin
when will it divideand compromise, your not afraid
tiny blinding black spots
dont you know what it used to be
they will spear us and bring
the feeling its inside the ground
hollow shell, someone to rip me out of the shadows
clouds go by on broken fire
white lights stab your hands are about to fade
soulmate

should i enter a couple of my poems in a young poet's competition?

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 4:26 am
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radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
your tightning skin
when will it divideand compromise, your not afraid
tiny blinding black spots
dont you know what it used to be
they will spear us and bring
the feeling its inside the ground
hollow shell, someone to rip me out of the shadows
clouds go by on broken fire
white lights stab your hands are about to fade
soulmate

should i enter a couple of my poems in a young poet's competition?


"i should enter a couple of my poems in a young poet's competition"

what competition were how and why?

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:14 pm
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
your tightning skin
when will it divideand compromise, your not afraid
tiny blinding black spots
dont you know what it used to be
they will spear us and bring
the feeling its inside the ground
hollow shell, someone to rip me out of the shadows
clouds go by on broken fire
white lights stab your hands are about to fade
soulmate

should i enter a couple of my poems in a young poet's competition?


"i should enter a couple of my poems in a young poet's competition"

what competition were how and why?

dunno, just a thought

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Dec 20, 2010 2:39 pm
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interesting thought.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 4:09 am
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ok what are my poems about? most of them are about political issues, but you'll get the occasional one about experiences, lonliness, just random sentences, hatred towards cyber space, etc.
like the one i recently posted-some lines in that are about political issues, but the last couple of lines are about lonliness.

twisted thoughts in an empty mind
your stabbing your own food to live
struggle if you wish but you cant croud inside
seeing through broken glass
gone in a thin trunk so be it
freely i admit on ash broken fire


that ones about anerexia

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 8:47 am
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Twitching through space
And time
Making waves
Smashing sounds
And concrete
Lazily spinning
Gazily grinning


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:41 am
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Christmas, add 1 line or 15, variations of lines, stay close to "The Night Before Christmas" poem but different or not so different if it fits, you know. here's my version of a start:



t'was some nights before Christmas
round the Forum, Fenders Lounge
not a byte of info was traveling
not a light blinking
not even a mouse clicking
anywhere in this guitar house

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:50 am
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Christmas, add 1 line or 15, variations of lines, stay close to "The Night Before Christmas" poem but different or not so different if it fits, you know. here's my version of a start:



t'was some nights before Christmas
round the Forum, Fenders Lounge
not a byte of info was traveling
not a light blinking
not even a mouse clicking
anywhere in this guitar house


gig bags hanging
by the loading doors there
spirits of Leo and George
watch us with love and care
The IT team were nestled all snug in their beds
While visions of terabyte servers danced in their heads

with the Stratocaster in its hard-case
and the Telecaster on its stand
Fender offices lights switched to dimmer
computers moved to hibernate for
an overdue rest on this winters night

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:07 pm
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cold, snow and windy today
but the natur looks so good
so i got a thought
packed my strat and go
to show my strat
as winter model, yo

Image

cheers :D

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:10 am
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Christmas, add 1 line or 15, variations of lines, stay close to "The Night Before Christmas" poem but different or not so different if it fits, you know. here's my version of a start:



t'was some nights before Christmas
round the Forum, Fenders Lounge
not a byte of info was traveling
not a light blinking
not even a mouse clicking
anywhere in this guitar house

gig bags hanging
by the loading doors there
spirits of Leo and George
watch us with love and care
The IT team were nestled all snug in their beds
While visions of terabyte servers danced in their heads

with the Stratocaster in its hard-case
and the Telecaster on its stand
Fender offices lights switched to dimmer
computers moved to hibernate for
an overdue rest on this winters night


this is my favorite Christmas poem
http://www.christmas-tree.com/stories/n ... stmas.html

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:12 am
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Triskele wrote:
cold, snow and windy today
but the natur looks so good
so i got a thought
packed my strat and go
to show my strat
as winter model, yo

Image

cheers :D

cool pic, thanks for posting

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:36 am
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Love in the Night


Stunning curves hug your body
Like a lover in the night.
Eyes fall shut as breath begins
Running from collapsing lungs.
Your beauty is matched only
By your feel: soft, warm, and smooth.
Roused fingers caress your neck.
When I plug....slow into you
Adrenalin swells inside.
Sweat beads as I wait release.
With out a word I tremble,
With passionI strike your note.


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 4:20 pm
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dont make noise
or the floating traffic jam will notice
by you some time
hide in a vineyard
the bombs about to fall
we're above it

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:51 am
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a day of days, what was today
a day in which all I could think about
was other days
for today you see I didn't really have a plan
other then a regular schedule, the everyday tasks at hand
started the day as usual
showed up at the office sat down at my desk
and like every other day, tried to do my best
the difference was I had no thoughts about today
with no scheduled plan my mind started thinking
about other days
I started with tomorrow and then the day after that
and the next day and the next
until I just lost track
of the day I was in
then I changed and thought back
until I thought about yesterday
and then the one before that
now back to the present
with the same situation as this day began
today the day I didn't have a plan
the day wasn't wasted though
in all that time I had completed
my normal tasks at hand
when I looked up at the clock it was time to leave the office
another day of work completed while I thought about this
every day except today

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:24 am
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see the days
before your leave
wondering senceslly
free the dirt
underground in pot hole channels
it wont last
sits on a bed made out of concrete
waveless the hand goes by

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