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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2016 12:16 pm
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Those holiday postings were great gang. Thanks, for that Rollie.

Here's another:

Christmas comes but once a year
When it comes? It's almost here
Everyday it gets a little closer
Oh, Boy!


That'll be the day for words of love
To embrace the ones you're thinking of
If you've been bad . . . It's too late.
That'll be the day.

Rock around with Ollie Vee
Wishing a Strat beneath the tree
Rock me my baby
Listen to me


Reminiscing True love ways
Not fade away the Holly days
And celebrate throughout the year
Buddy's Heartbeat still lives here.

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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2016 2:09 pm
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Merry Christmas to you too FSB.
Rock and Roll love is music to me
Thank you so much my friend
Have a toddy or two on me :D

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2016 6:40 pm
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Merry Christmas to you too FSB.
Rock and Roll love is music to me
Thank you so much my friend
Have a toddy or two on me :D
You have a great thread, and I am certain that others would agree with me that you are a gift to this Forum bro'. I will give a toast to you with those toddies, and hope Santa returns the gift to you. :D

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:29 pm
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Bro to Bros you too are so welcome to me FSB
I must confess, Santa has been here, a consult about twice a year, my concern I've expressed, he said I talk only to the best, have you been talking with the big red guy again FSB? 8)

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2016 11:29 pm
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Aw, shucks there you are being too kind again. I haven't talked to the big guy for some time, but, since he's a close neighbour of mine (being an honorary Canuck at this time of year), I'll put in a good word for you should I see him. :wink:

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2016 1:13 am
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Thank you FSB !

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Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2016 1:32 am
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Fender Strat Brat wrote:
Lights upon the Christmas tree
Presents on the floor
But, it's not what's happening in the house
It's what's outside the door.

There's laughter, cheer, and presents missing
From those without a home
For those in peril, and those unknown
For those who seek a shelter
And those who live alone.

Still Christmas always finds a place
To stage a playing part
That's shared amongst the world throughout
It comes from in the heart.

Thanks again FSB.

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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2016 3:33 pm
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Fenderseeker09 wrote:
A haiku:

The sun rising high
In the clear mid-Autumn skies
Watching the birds fly.

Haiku II:

The night sky is filled
With heavenly orbs and stars
Symphony of light.

Haiku III:

The sand of the beaches
And the pearls in the oysters
Hourglass treasures.

Haiku IV:

Raindrops hitting water
The pond seeing spring arrive
A shower, a song.

Haiku V:

Climbing a mountain
Oasis at the summit
Triumph with a view.

Got a wee bit carried away there...just kept writing 'em.

Merry Christmas Fenderseeker09. You are missed here, very much,
Rollie

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2016 4:40 pm
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Okay, here goes nothing. Thanks, to the haikus in this thread I'm going to try my first in time for this Christmas season. I might crash and burn, but I don't give up easily. Let me know if I pass or if and why I fail.
Thanks!

Holidays are almost here
Forest shares a tree
You always light up my life


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2016 4:57 pm
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A good friend has written
Christmas wishes of love
Some one special for the Holidays

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2016 5:11 pm
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Methinks my first haiku is a failure with 7/5/7 syllables? If it needs to be 5/7/5 syllables here is version 2:

Holidays soon here
Forest shares a fallen tree
You light up my life


Cheers!
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Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2016 8:27 pm
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My first try showed me,thankyou Fenderseeker09, that I liked the vibe but couldn't follow those instructions lol.
Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Fenderseeker09, the 5, 7 ,5 syllable structure is different for sure Bro. I think you are very good at it.

thoughts and words from the mind
these are most interest-ing and curious
awake, alert, at rest

asleep, thoughts winter season
dreams like snow-flakes fall at random
like different songs, unique measures

gave it at try, I hope its close.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2016 9:40 pm
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Haiku anyone?
I posted this note on Marian Hayes page at the Guild Literary Complex website. Marian is from my home town Chicago and the author of a poem, "The Blues".
I hope that this note is ok. Let me know if it is please brothers and sisters?

Marian,
A haiku poem, including you
little blue tome, something new
with truest tone, like hearty sinew
current thoughts ohm, from color cue

azul earthly dome, my favorite too
to dreamers loam, words are the clew
in the center pome, kindness nourishing dew
and so love shown, yes your nous la doux

my smile grown, disappear le mous
happy today, thanks to you
my crafted om, your skillful coo
on passed hone, for a reflection or two ?

Just a note, only a note,
thankyou,
Roland

PS: Haiku anyone?
Just when I thought I had it, once again I bow to the master. It seems my haiku is still a work in progress. Well, I may not be good at it; but, at least I'm not a quitter. :lol:
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I'll try again later when I get the courage up (and time). :wink:

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 6:13 pm
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could not resist lol

Once, a boy named Nevin was conceived
Happy Mother, her blessing received
Angels said he was heaven sent indeed
And, rest under this star for all the world to see

Don sent the maji, his boys
and said follow that star as it were
so, 3 wise guys set out on their toys
bearing gifts of gold, frankincense and myrrh.
The Don was pleased

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2016 6:54 pm
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I knew you had it in you, SBLS. I did finally get it being the old geezer that I am. Good stuff, my friend.

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