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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2015 8:53 pm
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these thoughts I had today
as I moved from room to room
tidy up here and there
like every other day
thoughts that were more like greetings
emotions with meanings
or feelings, should I say
to write them now
I wonder how
to find the way to say
these thoughts

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2015 3:25 pm
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Falling falling falling falling down
stopped now because of ground
chute opened wide just in time
sorry Lord for all that F'n n C'n
"That's ok you are forgiven"
just glad I wasn't the guy below
when you were falling pissin n peein


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2015 5:11 am
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It was raining, the consistency of grease
looked like something else
smelled beyond belief
how did this get up there
in a cloud at the very least
then it stopped, I saw what happened
I was beneath a flock of geese

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2015 1:25 pm
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I swam with snorkel amongst the flows
And felt the fish about my toes.
The jellyfish went floating by
My mask and face.

I stayed away
Because the sting would stop my play
With dolphins and their funny smiles.
Their shaking heads, and speedy jumps
Were feared by sharks and watched by humps.

But, there I was amongst the bunch
Of creatures caught and served for lunch.
I often thought I might swim more
But, chickened out and swam for shore.

I turned to creatures large and small
To give a goodbye wave to all.

And so I end this tale of sea
It wasn't true, it wasn't me.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2015 5:14 pm
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Worm Hole

Through a worm hole
mechanical fishing pole
this slip 'n' slide
on a machine minded glide
into the outside
mystery cosmos ride
counter through cosmic gases thick
this past to future clock so quick
that a wake of vibrations
refashioned to crashing aurations
shaken the raw iron garden
pulsed liquid rock which heavily hardened
to form a dawdling roundabout
exit looking within smiling throughout

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2015 9:20 pm
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Worm Hole:
Kubrick would love to have read that poem. I did.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2015 12:28 pm
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Thank you FSB. Me too you beyond the sea.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2015 11:59 pm
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Paris, France is feeling the pain
Terrorists have struck them again
With cowardice and fear

They sneak and they hide
And someday appear
To do evil deeds for what they feel right
They walk streets by day
And strike in the night

They are guided by those who would do us some harm
They think it a blessing to sound the alarm
Radicals speak and spread what they seek
To recruit ill informed, self serving, and weak.

But, never believe that there isn't a face
That smiles for the future, and strives for what's right
With love and peace to spread for the best
Feeling pity and hope for the misguided rest

So look to the victims and give them a prayer
It's hard to explain unless you are there
Look to tomorrow and days that will come
Convince those of terror that we're really just one.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 10:38 am
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Fender Strat Brat wrote:
Paris, France is feeling the pain
Terrorists have struck them again
With cowardice and fear

They sneak and they hide
And someday appear
To do evil deeds for what they feel right
They walk streets by day
And strike in the night

They are guided by those who would do us some harm
They think it a blessing to sound the alarm
Radicals speak and spread what they seek
To recruit ill informed, self serving, and weak.

But, never believe that there isn't a face
That smiles for the future, and strives for what's right
With love and peace to spread for the best
Feeling pity and hope for the misguided rest

So look to the victims and give them a prayer
It's hard to explain unless you are there
Look to tomorrow and days that will come
Convince those of terror that we're really just one.

FSB
Peace.


Well said FSB!

Peace, (not fear),
Gridlok


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 2:36 pm
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Thanks, Gridlok.

Have a good one.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2015 2:56 pm
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gridlok wrote:

Well said FSB!

Peace, (not fear),
Gridlok

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2015 2:59 am
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(edited this, hope it's an improvement)

How to start
to start again or
in another word, restart
for you and I
man it has been awhile
trying to and, trying to not
not try, to write in any certain style
all the while facing
a different life, changing times
adjustments made, began the trial
so far so good, for a few more miles
back to us though
hope all is well
to be clear as a bell
a fluttering note
like a signified cloak
and, gone

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2015 12:22 am
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Beautiful, SBLS.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2015 3:02 am
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Thank you FSB. Your poem for Paris is very thoughtful. The France President Francois Gerard Georges Nicolas Hollande
would appreciate your inspiring words.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Nov 29, 2015 1:55 pm
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You're too kind SBLS. Thanks.

It's a tough world out there, and those in need should always know they are not alone. IMHO.

This thread is one great way to convey that opinion. Good on ya. Now if we could unite the world's children like the gang on this Forum . . . that would be sweet music.

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