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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 4:41 pm
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Thank you, SLBS, I feel honored to be included on the list. There are a lot of great contributors, including yourself.


Thank You spacewolf!
haiku?

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 5:00 pm
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haiku?

That's a fine idea
I'll start the haiku flowing
Someone else's turn

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 6:01 pm
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I'll wait for my turn
while someone else takes a turn
like waiting for the sun

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2014 9:20 pm
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This turn I will take
opportunity arose
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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2014 3:59 pm
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The sun is setting
But alas, night is the bridge
To a fresh new dawn.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 1:41 am
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:D bump

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:52 pm
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the new dawn did come
now late afternoon shows
an orange hue of the sun

nights bridge approaches
from the east it comes
crosses without motions

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 8:08 pm
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haiku?

spacewolf:
That's a fine idea
I'll start the haiku flowing
Someone else's turn

SBLS: I'll wait for my turn
while someone else takes a turn
like waiting for the sun

socal323: This turn I will take
opportunity arose
I have no regret

SBLS: regret not have I
taking this opportunity
to wait for anothers turn

Fenderseeker09: The sun is setting
But alas, night is the bridge
To a fresh new dawn.

SBLS: the new dawn did come
now late afternoon shows
an orange hue of the sun

nights bridge approaches
from the east it comes
crosses without motions

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Apr 03, 2014 2:57 am
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Feathered Ends

An old man awakens on a park bench
Perhaps not so old

He sees a pretty little girl standing in front of him

Just staring

And the man stares back thru his watery powder blue eyes

“ Are you lonely?” the little girl asks

“So lonely”

“Are you cold?” she continues

“So cold”

“Are you hungry?” she earnestly enquires

“So hungry”

And with that, the man nods back off
But not for long perhaps

He awakens again and sees the little girl still standing in front of him

“ Are you tired of being lonely?” the little girl asks

“So tired”

“Are you tired of being cold?” she continues

“So tired”

“Are you tired of being hungry?” she earnestly concludes

“So.”

But she raises a chubby little finger to the man’s lips
And smiles the warmest of smiles


And in that instant
The most beautiful pair of white wings throw open from behind her
The most beautiful things you’ve ever seen
& the man & the angel rise
To fall asleep
This day
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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2014 9:02 pm
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magicrising, beautiful. Thanks.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Apr 14, 2014 9:52 pm
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a bump in the road
a bump on my head
a bump on the snout of my little dog fred

the road grew so bumpy and bumped the car about
the wheel bumped my head and the dashboard bumped freddie's snout

a bump there and over there too
bumping along the bumpy road
until many bumps are only a few

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Apr 24, 2014 8:11 pm
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apologies all

I would like to apologize
for everything today
all of those things that I didn't do
when I should have done
and those things that I did do
that I shouldn't have
all of them, every one

the words that I said at the times that I said them
talking without thinking, thoughtless words
my mind always in another place
those words I should have said that were needed
at those times important but not heeded
I am sorry

as time has passed you waited patiently
for a part of me that showed occasionally
that part of me is here more now
if I can I will be better to make up somehow
but just for now
I would like to apologize
for everything

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 2:10 am
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spacewolf wrote:
Thank you, SLBS, I feel honored to be included on the list. There are a lot of great contributors, including yourself.

You are very welcome spacewolf and thank you too.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 4:09 am
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Poem I wrote about my Therapist who goes crazy listening to peoples stories over & over again, and decides she want to terminate herself.
(I did however, put some music to it later on, creating my first song)
TERMINATION written 6/25/14

Set your pace, and walk in the room
thought you'd get to my mind real soon

Just can't take it, anymore you thought
but found another case, you thought you never bought

Stuck with my thoughts, you just didn't buy
you shake your head, and wonder why

Take your place
a private office space,
sit in your chair,
do you really really care

Just another day
Does it really pay
Make it go away
I'm not here to stay

My sanity is gone, I hope it's not too late
I just wanna get out, I want to terminate

Just another day
Does it really pay
Make it go away
I'm not here to stay
Terminate today

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2014 10:21 pm
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Dolores, you have wit, an endearing quality.

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