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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 10:42 pm
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
pre stars speeding to the dirt
keeps on falling but it stays on the ground
inside and out is all to much
what is happening
it feels lighter and keeps on rolling
a it feels face comes and throws him up
not paying attention his face went down into the ground
as with his body went too
running right it doesn't stop
sorry for whatever i did


stars speeding
face to face
what is happening inside
rolling is all lighter
down into the ground
mysterious running, it feels right not paying attention
as with sorry, it doesn't stop
whatever i did, his, him, is all too out falling

Forgot a moment 8)

i like it

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thanks Riley, you've got the Knack. 8)

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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Triton Thrasher, this yours Bro?

There was a young man from Australia,
Who painted his arse like a dahlia,
The colours were true,
They were red white and blue,
But the smell was a bit of a failya.

:lol: funny!


Mine? Course not- that would take imagination and originality!


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Triton Thrasher wrote:
Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Triton Thrasher, this yours Bro?

There was a young man from Australia,
Who painted his arse like a dahlia,
The colours were true,
They were red white and blue,
But the smell was a bit of a failya.

:lol: funny!


Mine? Course not- that would take imagination and originality!


Its yours then! Because, you've got imagination and originality written all over you Bro.

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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:

Its yours then! Because, you've got imagination and originality written all over you Bro.


Is it the way I sawed my Stagg headstock?
The Tele Police want me put in the dock.

It's made in China- it sounds like a zither,
Plucked by my wire-haired Scotch grandmither.


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Triton Thrasher wrote:
Solid Body Love Songs wrote:

Its yours then! Because, you've got imagination and originality written all over you Bro.


Is it the way I sawed my Stagg headstock?
The Tele Police want me put in the dock.

It's made in China- it sounds like a zither,
Plucked by my wire-haired Scotch grandmither.


lucky you to have such a grandmither
for not one ither one i've got nither

The Tele, it is the way, you want stagg headstock
when the police are on it saw off the dock

8) TT

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Triton Thrasher wrote:
Is it the way I sawed my Stagg headstock?
The Tele Police want me put in the dock.

It's made in China- it sounds like a zither,
Plucked by my wire-haired Scotch grandmither.


I meant to say "put me in the dock," but I'm such a wacky bohemian poet today I wrote it wrong way round.

And yet, I hear the haunting twanging, single coil sound,

Of a former Stagg T-type that is now a genuine Fender,
After the attentions of saw, rasp and sandpaper so tender.

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Triton Thrasher wrote:
Triton Thrasher wrote:
Is it the way I sawed my Stagg headstock?
The Tele Police want me put in the dock.

It's made in China- it sounds like a zither,
Plucked by my wire-haired Scotch grandmither.


I meant to say "put me in the dock," but I'm such a wacky bohemian poet today I wrote it wrong way round.

And yet, I hear the haunting twanging, single coil sound,

Of a former Stagg T-type that is now a genuine Fender,
After the attentions of saw, rasp and sandpaper so tender.

Image

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Nice one TT you did good
but tell us all if you could
was there any less tone
now it's shaved to the bone
has sustiaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
in your playin
been lost for good


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Searching for the next chord, during Mystery Train,

I claim it's sustain, tho' it's really bad playin'.


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gotta hand it to ya sbls... really cool thread. enjoyed reading everybody's thoughts.
well, here goes...

Gather all your papers torn and scattered on the floor.
Tape them back together like they were the day before.
Cover up the seams so you can’t see them anymore.
Paint them pretty. Hang them up on the refrigerator door.
Pouring out my life like the sand that’s in my shoe.
I want to change the world but I’ve got better things to do.
Sitting on the potter’s wheel, perhaps I’ll take a spin.
Touch me while I turn and you can change the shape I’m in.
Looking at the picture from the painter’s point of view,
Everything looks good except this tiny bit of blue.
So tell me what it’s like to be the fly upon the wall,
You know, the one who flew off laughing – laughing – laughing.

(See Jeremiah 18:1-4)

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Posted: Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:16 am
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ell, here goes...

FrankieTheKid wrote:

"Gather all your papers torn and scattered on the floor.
Tape them back together like they were the day before.
Cover up the seams so you can’t see them anymore.
Paint them pretty. Hang them up on the refrigerator door.
Pouring out my life like the sand that’s in my shoe.
I want to change the world but I’ve got better things to do.
Sitting on the potter’s wheel, perhaps I’ll take a spin.
Touch me while I turn and you can change the shape I’m in.
Looking at the picture from the painter’s point of view,
Everything looks good except this tiny bit of blue.
So tell me what it’s like to be the fly upon the wall,
You know, the one who flew off laughing – laughing – laughing.

(See Jeremiah 18:1-4)"

Frankie,
laughable, supposed, hardly
crumpled paper floors
from here to there
then over to the door
pick them up perhaps
smooth them out
might they look then
like before
or better than
the spinning world
Gods potters wheel
touch the picture
change the look
point of view
Everything
except this tiny bit of blue
except this tiny bit of blue
"tell me what it’s like to be the fly upon the wall"
You, FrankieTheKid, know what it’s like
you communicate Bro
couldn't find Jeremiah 18:1-4) must have flew off l

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looks like my song from circa 1983 now has an extended dance re-mix.
nice 'bounce" sbls... you definately have the knack.

oh, here's the extended dance mix from jeremiah...

Jer 18:1 The word which came to Jeremiah from the LORD, saying,
Jer 18:2 Arise, and go down to the potter's house, and there I will cause thee to hear my words.
Jer 18:3 Then I went down to the potter's house, and, behold, he wrought a work on the wheels.
Jer 18:4 And the vessel that he made of clay was marred in the hand of the potter: so he made it again another vessel, as seemed good to the potter to make it.
Jer 18:5 Then the word of the LORD came to me, saying,
Jer 18:6 O house of Israel, cannot I do with you as this potter? saith the LORD. Behold, as the clay is in the potter's hand, so are ye in mine hand, O house of Israel.

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FrankieTheKid wrote:
looks like my song from circa 1983 now has an extended dance re-mix.
nice 'bounce" sbls... you definately have the knack.

oh, here's the extended dance mix from jeremiah...

Jer 18:1 The word which came to Jeremiah from the LORD, saying,
Jer 18:2 Arise, and go down to the potter's house, and there I will cause thee to hear my words.
Jer 18:3 Then I went down to the potter's house, and, behold, he wrought a work on the wheels.
Jer 18:4 And the vessel that he made of clay was marred in the hand of the potter: so he made it again another vessel, as seemed good to the potter to make it.
Jer 18:5 Then the word of the LORD came to me, saying,
Jer 18:6 O house of Israel, cannot I do with you as this potter? saith the LORD. Behold, as the clay is in the potter's hand, so are ye in mine hand, O house of Israel.


thanks for posting, the extended dance mix from jeremiah... a forgotten passage. I apologize for not remembering.

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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
thanks for posting, the extended dance mix from jeremiah... a forgotten passage. I apologize for not remembering.

no apology necessary. there's a lot of good stuff in that ol' book.
as ian anderson said in Christmas Song, "You'd do well to remember the things He later said".
i've been trying to find some inspiration to work on new songs, but peace and quiet here at frankie's palace are two rare commodities. this thread has charged my battery.

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