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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:51 pm
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Thank you alexander-57 ! I try to write something once in a while here and there are some Forum Bros that have posted and so have you Bro. In this thread all manner of wordsmithing is welcome. Feel free to write a verse or line or what ever words you want Alex. 8)

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:27 am
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well
what do you know
what do you hear
what do you say
just dropped in
just to see
if some one had written some words
anyway
or anyhow
for today
but alas there is news
news for today
a "hello" or "good bye"
a "how've you been" or "good day"
an "it's been so long" or "on my way"
a "missed you much" or "cheerio old friend"
no word no letter
no dot no dash
just blank page and blank space
an empty verse
yes alas
what there was so I guess
I'll just have to pass
on some words today
and perhaps then come back
to look again because
there just might be
a "you're looking good" or "see you later"
a "greetings to all" or "after while alligator"
yeah there just might be
I'll come back and see
maybe there won't
maybe there will
looking to look and see
have to wait until
a little later

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:22 pm
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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
well
what do you know
what do you hear
what do you say
just dropped in
just to see
if some one had written some words
anyway
or anyhow
for today
but alas there is news
news for today
a "hello" or "good bye"
a "how've you been" or "good day"
an "it's been so long" or "on my way"
a "missed you much" or "cheerio old friend"
no word no letter
no dot no dash
just blank page and blank space
an empty verse
yes alas
what there was so I guess
I'll just have to pass
on some words today
and perhaps then come back
to look again because
there just might be
a "you're looking good" or "see you later"
a "greetings to all" or "after while alligator"
yeah there just might be
I'll come back and see
maybe there won't
maybe there will
looking to look and see
have to wait until
a little later


:oops:

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:19 pm
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Sitting in the corner
Chin cupped in her hands
She was starring in a mirror
As if the world was at an end
I got up and walked on over
Asked her what’s your name
She only shrugged her shoulders
And in the mirror starred again
I thought I’d sit beside her
And with her stare awhile
Then she finally leaned on over
And with these words began to cry

The words she spoke they quiver
So softly hard to hear
My true love gone forever
And no children did I bare
So you see I’m all alone here
And often really scarred
Only one friend left to call on
But I know she’s always there
So wherever I may travel
Or how long I may be gone
Just by starring in the mirror
I can take my friend along


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 8:33 pm
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Turn poem into song add Chorus:

Sitting in the corner
Chin cupped in her hands
She was starring in a mirror
As if the world was at an end
I got up and walked on over
Asked her what’s her name
She only shrugged her shoulders
And in the mirror starred again
I thought I’d sit beside her
And with her stare awhile
Then she finally leaned on over
And with these words began to cry

Tell me will you mister
Does the good lord have a plan
Do you think that all this matters
Do you think he really cares
And do you ever stop to wonder
If our faith is in his hands
So tell me will you mister
Does the good lord have a plan

The words she spoke they quiver
So softly hard to hear
My true love he’s gone forever
And no children did I bare
So you see I’m all alone here
And often really scarred
Only one friend left to call on
But I know she’s always there
So wherever I may travel
Or how long I may be gone
Just by starring in the mirror
I can take my friend along

So tell me will you mister
Does the good lord have a plan
Do you think that all this matters
Do you think he really cares
And do you ever stop to wonder
If our faith is in his hands
So tell me will you mister
Does the good lord have a plan


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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Tue Mar 22, 2011 11:49 pm
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I registered and saw this thread. I thought I might as well give it a try.


There once was a man with a Fender
He was stuck on a solo, it was a real mind-bender.
For a moment he thought he just wasn't the right gender,
Remembering the grade-school days when the girls were slender,
With the wit that used to make him surrender.
With one final grunt, he went to bed,
Wishing he could only remember.

The rising sun brought out a new day.
As he woke he felt that his talent would not be held at bay.
He stared at his guitar and said "I have a lot to say!"
"You're hard to play, be as it may, but not today!"

Then he turned to his mirror with a grin
And sat on his stool with a spin.
he was tired of the chagrin.
His fingers touched the strings; it was time to begin.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:05 pm
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gcomeau wrote:
Sitting in the corner
Chin cupped in her hands
She was starring in a mirror
As if the world was at an end
I got up and walked on over
Asked her what’s your name
She only shrugged her shoulders
And in the mirror starred again
I thought I’d sit beside her
And with her stare awhile
Then she finally leaned on over
And with these words began to cry

The words she spoke they quiver
So softly hard to hear
My true love gone forever
And no children did I bare
So you see I’m all alone here
And often really scarred
Only one friend left to call on
But I know she’s always there
So wherever I may travel
Or how long I may be gone
Just by starring in the mirror
I can take my friend along

Welcome to the Forum gcomeau! You communicate Bro! You are in great guitar/music company here. From your words, you feel right at home. Thank you for the cool post.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2011 5:24 pm
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Schism wrote:
I registered and saw this thread. I thought I might as well give it a try.


There once was a man with a Fender
He was stuck on a solo, it was a real mind-bender.
For a moment he thought he just wasn't the right gender,
Remembering the grade-school days when the girls were slender,
With the wit that used to make him surrender.
With one final grunt, he went to bed,
Wishing he could only remember.

The rising sun brought out a new day.
As he woke he felt that his talent would not be held at bay.
He stared at his guitar and said "I have a lot to say!"
"You're hard to play, be as it may, but not today!"

Then he turned to his mirror with a grin
And sat on his stool with a spin.
he was tired of the chagrin.
His fingers touched the strings; it was time to begin.

Welcome to the Forum Schism! " I thought I might as well give it a try." I thought "that is a good try" or perhaps you have done that before. Very cool Bro. This is a great band of Brothers and Sisters on this Fender Forum, you'll fit.
Tool is a favorite band of mine as well.

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:05 pm
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Forecast for some rain today in Chicago

rainy day woman
rainy day girl
rainy day ladies
in ribbons and pearls
watching them scamper
through the raindrops they prance
trying to dodge the wetness
with a daringly cleverly shy raindance
sometimes taking shelter
'neath an awning outside
and pause for a moment
to catch their breaths and plan their steps
then start again their demure rainy strides
lovely visions all around me
dampish donnas assume their glides
I only wish that I had a vehicle
so I could offer all of them a ride
to where ever it is that they are going :wink:

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 3:35 am
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due to personal reason's, i will not be putting my poetry up here as frequently as i used to. i still write it, of course, just that i'm in the middle of lots of things at the moment.

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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 4:10 am
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radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
due to personal reason's, i will not be putting my poetry up here as frequently as i used to. i still write it, of course, just that i'm in the middle of lots of things at the moment.

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took awhile to remember this should be changed, for the better I hope:

she wears black leather
black all the way down
from her black leather beret
to black stiletto's on her feet

a passionate mission
controls my mind
just want her with me
think we're two of a kind

this sleek black widow
puts my brain at ease
kiss her face down to her tummy
hug her body, a lovers squeeze

the game of love with a little lust
together we should be
objectively I'll tell her
so she will be apt to agree

she said "we'll meet later tonight"
I'll speak in a voice clear and bright
"want us to love with all of our might"
and hope the one that she takes home, will be me

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Post subject: Re: YOUR POETRY
Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2011 12:50 am
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a rhyme
some time
the matter is
what matter is
if, you can find it
if you can, find it
what you choose to do
do what you choose to
hope what you have found
what hope you have found
is what matters
some time
a rhyme
is the matter

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Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 5:01 am
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"Eat an apple on going to bed,
And you'll keep the doctor from earning his bread."
Said someone from Wales long ago
for those many reasons we all know.
On promoting health apples have a good claim,
To strengthen the immune system Vitamin C they contain.
They have phenols, which help the circulatory system.
Apples reduce tooth decay by cleaning bacteria off of 'em.
The quercetin found in apples protects the brain
against cell disorders like Alzheimer's Disease that can cause pain.
When the century turned so circulated variants of this rhyme.
Then in 1913 Elizabeth Wright recorded one for all time
in Rustic Speech and Folk-lore:

"Ait a happle avore gwain to bed, An' you'll make the doctor beg his bread; or as the more popular version runs: An apple a day Keeps the doctor away."

So, have an apple today if possible :lol:

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Posted: Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:22 am
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Roses are red.

Violets are blue.

Most poems rhyme.

Not this one.

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