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Posted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 7:14 pm
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A haiku:

The sun rising high
In the clear mid-Autumn skies
Watching the birds fly.

Haiku II:

The night sky is filled
With heavenly orbs and stars
Symphony of light.

Haiku III:

The sand of the beaches
And the pearls in the oysters
Hourglass treasures.

Haiku IV:

Raindrops hitting water
The pond seeing spring arrive
A shower, a song.

Haiku V:

Climbing a mountain
Oasis at the summit
Triumph with a view.

Got a wee bit carried away there...just kept writing 'em.

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Fenderseeker09, the 5, 7 ,5 syllable structure is different for sure Bro. I think you are very good at it.

thoughts and words from the mind
these are most interest-ing and curious
awake, alert, at rest

asleep, thoughts winter season
dreams like snow-flakes fall at random
like different songs, unique measures

gave it at try, I hope its close.

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radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
away from the rest
its just a big problem
where will it go now
swept from the rocks into the sea
its not my fault
its a plan to go and reach
get it away
he wont give up without 2 try's


always like your poetry Riley

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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
away from the rest
its just a big problem
where will it go now
swept from the rocks into the sea
its not my fault
its a plan to go and reach
get it away
he wont give up without 2 try's


always like your poetry Riley

thanks, I'll post some more later 8)

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pre stars speeding to the dirt
keeps on falling but it stays on the ground
inside and out is all to much
what is happening
it feels lighter and keeps on rolling
a mysterious face comes and throws him up
not paying attention his face went down into the ground
as with his body went too
running right it doesn't stop
sorry for whatever i did

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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:58 am
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teacher told the class today
that we all must write
a lot of words on paper
about a revolutionary fight
that happened a long time ago
between many people I don't know
I've read about it
and thought so much
and I'm blank from head to toe
for something to write
about this fight
that happened so long ago
my parents said I must write
and write because its right
to get a good grade in school
"so keep working on your paper
even if it takes all night"
I'd rather be asleep and dreaming
about the day
about my friends
about our play in the sun light
but that is not to be
good grades aren't free
homework is the pay for them
so
I just have to write
a lot of words on paper
about a revolutionary fight
that happened a long time ago
between people I don't know
I will write because its right
and when its done
I'll say good night

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Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 8:15 am
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gridlok, thank you Bro! I believe that you possess those attributes too, and, as you are an elder statesman here in the cyber-world of guitars and music, always look forward to your posts and threads.

Cheers,
SBLS 8)

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Solid Body Love Songs wrote:
Triton Thrasher wrote:
I can tell that's poetry, because the writing doesn't go all the way across the page.


try this;
Think, of her eyes, the sparkle of excitement as she awakens you with her gaze, her face, forehead, brow, nose, how her lips curl upward as she reaches for your kiss, how her hair falls against her cheeks and down her neck, her body, its curves, how she walks towards you, her legs, her scent as she brushes against you, like she is telling your nose that she wants your touch, and, as her arms hold you to her, in loves sweetest caress, this memory will last, yes it will, last.


The long thin version was easier to read.

I know this one:

There was a young man from Australia,
Who painted his arse like a dahlia,
The colours were true,
They were red white and blue,
But the smell was a bit of a failya.


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Triton Thrasher, this yours Bro?

There was a young man from Australia,
Who painted his arse like a dahlia,
The colours were true,
They were red white and blue,
But the smell was a bit of a failya.

:lol: funny!

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SBLS, you are one of the hippest, most genuine presences in this e-lounge.

Tres beaucoup fine to have a poetry reading now and then. Dig it.

Personally, 'don't do much thereon. Prose writing's the thing.


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A boy stood on a burning deck,
his feet were filled with blisters.
He climbed aloft,and his pants fell off,
so he had to wear his sister's.

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guitslinger wrote:
A boy stood on a burning deck,
his feet were filled with blisters.
He climbed aloft,and his pants fell off,
so he had to wear his sister's.


ah, his sisters pants
were to big
and found himself
dancing a jig
just to keep her pants up
with some twine tied them up
is what the blistered boy did

8) GS

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Thanks Solid Body Love Songs for creating this thread
Poems don't exist until they're shared and read
Now we at the forum can make the greatest rhymes
Without fear of being hit by fruit, including limes >____>

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JSJH wrote:
SBLS, you are one of the hippest, most genuine presences in this e-lounge.

Tres beaucoup fine to have a poetry reading now and then. Dig it.

Personally, 'don't do much thereon. Prose writing's the thing.


JSJH, Bro, merci beaucoup. I dig it the most.

Always look forward to reading your posts and threads, as a very well respected member of this Forum you are an expert at:
" Prose is the most typical form of language. The English word 'prose' is derived from the Latin prōsa, which literally translates as 'straight-forward.'"

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radio_friendly_unit_shifter wrote:
pre stars speeding to the dirt
keeps on falling but it stays on the ground
inside and out is all to much
what is happening
it feels lighter and keeps on rolling
a it feels face comes and throws him up
not paying attention his face went down into the ground
as with his body went too
running right it doesn't stop
sorry for whatever i did


stars speeding
face to face
what is happening inside
rolling is all lighter
down into the ground
mysterious running, it feels right not paying attention
as with sorry, it doesn't stop
whatever i did, his, him, is all too out falling

Forgot a moment 8)

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