Man, how many replies 0_o
thanks you all guys, now I'll try to make some lines.... than I'll drop it here

Woke up this morning - coldn't find my only shoes.
Woke up this morning - coldn't find my only shoes.
Guess I will take guitar - try to make some teenage blues.

I'm singing 'bout my baby - how I love her and how I can't sleep.
I'm singing 'bout my baby - how I love her and how I can't sleep.
She's my sweetest dream - but when I see her I'm losing my grip...

She's paking her case and jumping on in her boyfriend's ride.
She's paking her case and jumping on in her boyfriend's ride.
My darling, she leaves tonight - but I know she will back - so thats all right.

so...?

English ain't my native language buy the way)

Here it is: Александр Ляпин (Aleksandr Lyapin): "Холодное Пиво" ("Cold Beer")

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I really like all them "Aster" guitars. You know, like the Stratoc, Telec and Jazzm.

nice))

Some of my blues lyrics:

Blues for Jane

Some women treat you badly,
While others treat you good.
But I've never met a woman,
That I understood.

Everybody's different,
That's one thing that always holds true.
And now that I've met you babe,
I'd say nothing's changed with you.

You gotta thank em for the pleasures,
And thank them for the pains,
Some women sing in the churches,
While others pull the...

...well you get the idea.

Here is a general lyric writting tip:

Don't go overboard making things too personal. It is OK to write from a different perspective or by pretending to be someone you are not. In the end it is all your emotiona and insight.

To this mind, A LOT of subjects have not yet been explored as subjects of blues songs. You know the form and keys, here are a couple subjects.

Herp's been actin' up again an' my crotch looks like a sausage pizza...

My woman's mean and stabbed me and shot me and gave me syph but got out on parole and now she's comin' home again...

My Rottweiler ate the dogs across the street and they're lawyers and comin' for my house...

Gotta live in a refrigerator box on Lower Wacker Drive cause o' gettin' drunk and spending the rent on lotto tickets and Moon Pies....

'Roids been actin' up, big one hangin' to my knees...

Doc says lose 75 pounds and the chicken wing and pie eatin' contest is in two weeks, oh yeah...

Flight to Tahiti for vacation got cancelled and gotta wait until two more days to get away...

Now go write some blues songs.