It's a little grim. I'd love to hear the melody and progression.

What is the 'Black Virus'?

And congrats on you new song.

I'm sorry. It sucks losing a loved one. I hate it.

I hope you post the demo of this.

to record you could plug in to a comp? (note the question mark lol) or buy a cheap digital recorder

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Minutemen
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Pixies

Dear, GO_ME, I have lost both my parents to cancer, and they were only 57, and 73, I feel your anguish, and in dedicating your feelings through your music talent. I have played profesional blues from Chicago, to Boston, there is no such thing as a song that is too sad. I personally would like to see you drop some of the "black virus"in your song, and improvise to create an intellectual insight of this disease. Try a thesarus, or get some ideas from trusted ones who might have known these people. Belive me, It will hit a little deeper, and make your audience think, rather than the usual. I hope that I have not offended you by this, but I wish you good luck dude! BY the way.... I have a 24 year old son who might not make it until next week, I can tell you about sorrow. But... the band plays on... so... those can be qwelled by us players, the horrors of death and disease. there is music, and that never dies!!!!

I love it, its way better than my song writting.

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like riley said... i like it a lot and its much better than anything i can write

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Favorite bands:

Melvins
The Jesus Lizard
Cows
Big Business
R***man
Minutemen
Flight
Minor Threat
Big Black
Shellac
Karp
Scratch Acid
Wipers
Pixies

It is a little grim, but I like it.

OZZY RULES!!!

I really like it. Grim or happy, thats what the art of music is all about - putting your innermost feeling in your lyrics and music.

Keep up the good work my friend!

CC

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I like it, maybe take out the double chorus in the middle in case it gets a bit too repetitive though.

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Rated "M" for meaty.

CC said it for me.

Cancer is a mother######. I have lost some friends and family to it too.
-N

Thanks mate!

CC

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Blackstar HT-5

Very interesting, follow through on it.

Thanks to music it's been grand! Trying to get this EP done and dusted and I've been writing a lot and playing with different people so I'm keeping busy.

Thanks again, I hope all well with you also.

CC

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Blackstar HT-5

It is dark but I like it.lol Here is a little help or should I say change if you want


This Black virus is taking all these souls
This Black virus taking life as it grows
How many will it claim who will never grow old
This Black virus- God only knows