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Post subject: Wrote a song
Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:38 pm
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Tried to get away from the whole love song thing. Hope you like it. Tell me what you think.

"Can't Help But Try"

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Lyrics:
As I wonder blindly down this narrow road
I trip over everyone I pass
With each fall it gets more challenging to stand
And I know the next won't be the last
But far off in the distance there's a candle burning bold
That shows me someday maybe I won't feel so cold
Don't know when I'll reach it
But I'll keep walking on
'Cause I can't help but try

There's a hundred shepherds now for every sheep
Heading a hundred different ways
All the prophets dance and sing a different kind of song
Then trap their flock in a different maze
But far off in the distance there's a candle burning bold
That shows me someday maybe I won't feel so cold
Don't know when I'll reach it
But I'll keep walking on
'Cause I can't help but try

All the lonely lovers try to fool themselves
They pretend they're satisfied
But when they look their sweetheart straight in the eyes
They see their whole life passing by
But far off in the distance there's a candle burning bold
That shows me someday maybe I won't feel so cold
Don't know when I'll reach it
But I'll keep walking on
'Cause I can't help but try


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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:06 pm
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Your voice is awesome man, keep it up.

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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:09 pm
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You sing very well! Keep at it! 8)

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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 3:29 pm
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Wow, it's been a while, but you are improving and sounding better every time. Wish you did a full band version.

Very inspiring.


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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:07 pm
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Thanks guys! Yeah, I wish I could do a full band version, too, but it's so hard to find reliable musicians (an oxymoron, from my experience). Hopefully, when I move to NYC come August, things will change.


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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 8:21 pm
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that1guy435, cool song Bro, thanks for posting!

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