Honestly? Brutally honestly? I wasnt all that impressed. But as I think about it, theres no single element of your music that turned me off. Im trying to say this in a constructive way. So here goes...

Negative: Your songs were a bit too predictable and lacked intensity for my tastes. I didnt like the way they were mixed and produced. The singing was unimpressive, but it seemed to be highlighted by the mixing. The guitarwork was uninspired to me. I've seen a million bands that have an accoustic rhythm and a over-effected electric lead. It seemed every song was constructed the same way....repetitive. The songs generally lacked intensity, which is emotionally boring. Whitebread.

Positive: You have song writing talent. I think you have real potential. The playing was technically solid and the band appeared tight.

Recommendations: I'd de-emphasize the vocals or maybe get a different singer. Also, try to breath some life into the songs. Raise their intensity level. Music is about emotional expression. If its not "emotional", its boring.

I agree with Jay but I would keep at it no doubt. The songs were very predictable, but there is still something there. I'd dump the effects. Your vocals seem David Gilmour inspired, almost like you are trying to copy his vocal style. Be yourself and you'll be fine. Add some fire and passion to your music. Keep at it. I also agree with Jay about the acoustic rhythm and over effected electric guitar. Read some articles on recording techniques, it will help a lot. Patrick, please don't take any of my criticism personally.

Take Care