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Post subject: Breaking writer's block with first new track in months
Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:08 am
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Finally sat down to try to break the whole writer's block thing. More instruments this time, too.

Please let me know what you guys think.

"Another Page"

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jg5c6qnELAw

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http://www.myspace.com/jaybuntingmusic

Lyrics:
The vapor in the air won't wash away all of the cares
Of the sad-eyed girl who sits and thinks of him
And when the party ends we may never meet again
If you let him keep his home under your skin
Oh let me in

And if you threw your blankets to the wind
I've got another one that can hold us in
And if you feel a little cold well then move a little close
Cause if you try to lean on him he'll only let you fall again
You've gotta write another page

Well Mary Magdalene oh the dilemma that you're in
How can you save someone who makes you feel so small
And every time you try well you only die inside
I guess you'll never raise the dead after all
So come on girl

But your days are numbered and mine are too
So don't be afraid to start something new
Cause if you wait too long then the moment might be gone
So you should stay with me today, he never knew you anyway
You gotta write another page

The sirens in the air will send us rushing down the stairs
As we hide from all the men in black and blue
And as the flashlights shine I will shut your sad, sad eyes
While you loosen the laces of my shoes
I promise you

And if you threw your blankets to the wind
I've got another one that can hold us in
And if you feel a little cold well then move a little close
Cause if you try to lean on him he'll only let you fall again
You've gotta write another page


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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:17 am
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Guy,
Great stuff!!! Sometimes I have been like that where it took me forever to break a block. Keep up the great work!!!
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 9:29 am
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Cool video.

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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:04 pm
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Thanks guys


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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:44 pm
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that was really great! i would get that if it was on itunes. :D
you have some real talent there.


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Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:40 am
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Welcome back! Cool song, like the added guitar too!

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