Yup. Messed up stuff with this girl pretty bad. So I wrote a song about it. As always, thoughts and comments are really appreciated.

"Start Again"

YouTube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PxrNJBCsgY0

MySpace
http://www.myspace.com/jaybunting

Lyrics
Well fifty four messages and a letter I half wrote
A quiver stuck inside my throat
A permanent reminder of mistakes that I have made
Hoping I can see you before the good memories fade
Feel alone in a crowded room just waiting for your call
Hope I can still here anything at all
Cause my ears are ringing hard and loud from a conscience shouting out
So if you're wondering if I'm sorry then there really is no doubt

And if could only start again
Have a second chance at a lost romance
Well I know that I could show you then
But now the choice is up to you. So whatcha gonna do?

Well in 1992 I was born without a care
Now I'm trapped in frozen air
Cause without you here to warm me I can't seem to make it through
No without you here beside me I just can't seem to move

And if could only start again
Have a second chance at a lost romance
Well I know that I could show you then
But now the choice is up to you. So whatcha gonna do?

So if you hate me more than I hate myself that I understand all to well
And though I'm praying that you'll take me back I guess only time will tell
I guess only you can tell

And I never did believe you when you said you were done with love
I'll prove you haven't had enough
Though I know a million promises mean nothing without trust
Well honey please believe me. You won't have to leave it to luck

And if we could only start again
Well I know we'd last, know our time hasn't passed
This shouldn't have to be the end
I'll show you what I can be. Just stick around and see.

That was a pretty good song. Best of luck patching up your relationship.

Nice song! Best of luck to you in your quest to make up.

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thats a great song!

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Thanks guys! Any criticisms? That would really help...

None here, great job! Good luck!

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That's good song. At your age you better go ahead and start working on the next one followed by the I'm glad you're gone song.

Real nice song that1guy. Now you have to have it leaked out how you wrote a song about her and posted it on the Fender forum so she can view it. Girls love having songs written for them and after seeing this she will probably want to make up.

Another great song...I guess it did not woo said girlfriend? Just keep writing and playing. I hope someday she forgives you for whatever you did.

RK

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