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Post subject: my new song need help putting music to it though. The name
Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 1:08 pm
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We are the forgotten

on the bottom of the deepest sea, everlonging to be found, We are the forgotten. Buried alive by centuries of dirt and rubble, We are the forgotten. Chorus: Will you find us? Can you find us? underneath centuries of time, For we are forgotten. On the bottom of the deepest sea, everlonging to be found. We are the forgotten. Buried alive by centuries of dirt and rubble, we are the forgotten. written by : Shawn M. Smith 4/30/09 DemonSlayer Band

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Posted: Fri May 01, 2009 7:16 pm
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Sounds like it's about Atlantis or some other mystical place.

Try visualizing your favorite artist singing it. Maybe try and sing the lyrics over one of their songs. Try to arrange it according to their style and phrasing.

You'll get it. Just relax and let it flow.

If I think of anything I'll send it to you.


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Posted: Sat May 02, 2009 11:20 am
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Sounds to be in the style of an early Queen song lyricaly in my head


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Post subject: my song
Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 11:37 am
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yeah thats kinda what I was aiming for more of a classic song instead of screamo that I write. screamo gets kind of old. I write love songs too but I don't ever publish any of them. more of something to play on my alone time when im thinking. :D

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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 11:39 am
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mustangtoo wrote:
Sounds like it's about Atlantis or some other mystical place.

Try visualizing your favorite artist singing it. Maybe try and sing the lyrics over one of their songs. Try to arrange it according to their style and phrasing.

You'll get it. Just relax and let it flow.

thanx man. that helps I was thinking of a metallica type of style but not sure

If I think of anything I'll send it to you.

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Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 1:26 pm
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Hotice , bro , when i was reading your lyrics the first two rifs that came to mind were 'thunderstruck ' and 'shot down in flames' ,i don't want you to rip those songs just maybe change the progressions a little to darken them up and accommodate the lyric , if not , nevermind.

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