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Post subject: criticize, comment, dont matter let me have it
Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 6:36 pm
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graduations comin up for me soon and i decided i would write a kind of celebratory like song but it also has another meaning for which i wrote it but anyway let me have it :D

GRADUATION


5 more months and ill be free
of this eternity
wakin up about two thirty
no more bein in a hurry
noones gonna stop me now
cause i aint goin down

im goin to fast
cant stop it now
its comin now
but am i ready yet!
i dont know if
if i can handle it
cause all my life
ive just been a kid!

college parties no more tardies
thats whats awaiting me
in this life of freedom
is where im gonna be!
stayin out all night
if thats what i like
it doesnt matter to me
cause i aint got nowhere to be!

im goin to fast
cant stop it now
its comin now
but am i ready yet!
i dont know
if i can handle it
cause all my life
ive just been a kid!

now its time for graduation
im makin my final decision
im not missin out on this life
of great livin
noone thinks im gonna do it
now im gonna go and prove it

here it is now
its not so bad
im takin it down
and im enjoyin it!
now i know
that i can handle it
my new life
is about to begin!

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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:05 pm
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The following was written straight out.
No editing or anything, so its crap beyond measure.
But I think it gets my point across.


Five more months
and I'm in a rush
To shed this place
Release its crush

I want it over
and I'd like it now
I'll cross that stage
and walk right on out

10 months later
if only I knew
I'd want to go back
let the party ensue

The days are long gone
of women and fun
life is a grind
with work never done

I've tried parties on weekends
and nights on the beach
but the magic sinks further
and further from reach

One lesson you learn
and its always to late
rushing through life
is a BIG BIG mistake

For as you grow old
and nostalgia sets in
you'll want to go back
and do it again

This time you would try
with all that you've got
to live in the moment
and enjoy it nonstop

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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:18 pm
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Hey, thats mm unique.... what style will this be? sounds nice :)


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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:33 pm
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life's a hard teacher. pay attention. don't be lazy... graduation?... welcome to kindergarten.

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Post subject: Re: criticize, comment, dont matter let me have it
Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:47 pm
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Pgkinder91 wrote:
graduations comin up for me soon and i decided i would write a kind of celebratory like song but it also has another meaning for which i wrote it but anyway let me have it :D

GRADUATION


5 more months and ill be free
of this eternity
wakin up about two thirty
no more bein in a hurry
noones gonna stop me now
cause i aint goin down

im goin to fast
cant stop it now
its comin now
but am i ready yet!
i dont know if
if i can handle it
cause all my life
ive just been a kid!

college parties no more tardies
thats whats awaiting me
in this life of freedom
is where im gonna be!
stayin out all night
if thats what i like
it doesnt matter to me
cause i aint got nowhere to be!

im goin to fast
cant stop it now
its comin now
but am i ready yet!
i dont know
if i can handle it
cause all my life
ive just been a kid!

now its time for graduation
im makin my final decision
im not missin out on this life
of great livin
noone thinks im gonna do it
now im gonna go and prove it

here it is now
its not so bad
im takin it down
and im enjoyin it!
now i know
that i can handle it
my new life
is about to begin!

well done !!!

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Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:50 pm
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Carbonite wrote:
The following was written straight out.
No editing or anything, so its crap beyond measure.
But I think it gets my point across.


Five more months
and I'm in a rush
To shed this place
Release its crush

I want it over
and I'd like it now
I'll cross that stage
and walk right on out

10 months later
if only I knew
I'd want to go back
let the party ensue

The days are long gone
of women and fun
life is a grind
with work never done

I've tried parties on weekends
and nights on the beach
but the magic sinks further
and further from reach

One lesson you learn
and its always to late
rushing through life
is a BIG BIG mistake

For as you grow old
and nostalgia sets in
you'll want to go back
and do it again

This time you would try
with all that you've got
to live in the moment
and enjoy it nonstop

another poet !!! i now know whom to ask when i'm stuck on a lyric !

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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 11:45 am
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FrankieTheKid wrote:
life's a hard teacher. pay attention. don't be lazy... graduation?... welcome to kindergarten.


excuse me. whats that mean?

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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 12:56 pm
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Carbonite wrote:
The following was written straight out.
No editing or anything, so its crap beyond measure.
But I think it gets my point across.


Five more months
and I'm in a rush
To shed this place
Release its crush

I want it over
and I'd like it now
I'll cross that stage
and walk right on out

10 months later
if only I knew
I'd want to go back
let the party ensue

The days are long gone
of women and fun
life is a grind
with work never done

I've tried parties on weekends
and nights on the beach
but the magic sinks further
and further from reach

One lesson you learn
and its always to late
rushing through life
is a BIG BIG mistake

For as you grow old
and nostalgia sets in
you'll want to go back
and do it again

This time you would try
with all that you've got
to live in the moment
and enjoy it nonstop


i didnt get it at first but i get it now :lol: and yes it got your point across but im young and stupid let me learn from my mistakes :lol:

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Posted: Sun Feb 15, 2009 2:58 pm
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Pgkinder91 wrote:
FrankieTheKid wrote:
life's a hard teacher. pay attention. don't be lazy... graduation?... welcome to kindergarten.


excuse me. whats that mean?


Pgkinder91 wrote:
i didnt get it at first but i get it now :lol: and yes it got your point across but im young and stupid let me learn from my mistakes :lol:


exactly... don't take it too hard. consider it constructive criticism. years from now you'll look back and realize how easy you had it. what i meant was - life's a journey. you're just starting out. learn from other's mistakes and watch out you don't repeat them. "been there, done that" shouldn't be taken lightly, especially when somebody means it. more people care about you than you can imagine. i have 4 sons. two are out of high school, two haven't got there yet. last thing i want to see is them making the same mistakes i made.

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