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Post subject: Another song I wrote
Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:51 pm
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It's called "Somebody Else." I wrote it last night so it's still pretty rough and I'll probably change it a lot until I'm completely satisfied with it. So comments and criticism are especially appreciated. The vocals sound weird because I have a cold, I know.

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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:55 pm
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dude i really think your on to something keep going at this rate and youll have an album on your hands. one thing though might just be a personal opinion you could go a little quieter on the guitar and a little louder on the vocals but it still sounds great dude id like to get this one to if its alrite with you haha

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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:59 pm
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Yeah I'll e-mail it. The problem with this one is my condenser mic picked up a lot of the guitar as well so I don't just have a vocal track to turn up. But I'll see what I can do man thanks for the opinion.


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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:05 pm
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no problem man keep up the good work :wink:

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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:29 pm
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Make a record and Ill buy it.

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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:31 pm
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yeah man make a record. you got some really good songs.


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Evrything goes whan it's a starter. You'll get better as the time goes by.


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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 5:11 am
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this one's cool too. keep up the good work man!

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Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 5:20 am
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Keep Playin'./ :)




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notabag wrote:
Again, great job! Good lyrics and melody! I couldn't help but notice the Strat AND Jaguar behind you. I'd love to hear you play a song with the Jag (I just tried one in my local GC yesterday).


I'll probably use the Strat in one of the songs I'm writing now because I want to use my Small Clone. The Jaguar I really only use for more punk-y stuff (Iggy Pop, Nirvana, etc.) because I prefer single coils for clean sounds but its definitely a great guitar for that kind of stuff.


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notabag wrote:
Again, great job! Good lyrics and melody! I couldn't help but notice the Strat AND Jaguar behind you. I'd love to hear you play a song with the Jag (I just tried one in my local GC yesterday).


I'll probably use the Strat in one of the songs I'm writing now because I want to use my Small Clone. The Jaguar I really only use for more punk-y stuff (Iggy Pop, Nirvana, etc.) because I prefer single coils for clean sounds but its definitely a great guitar for that kind of stuff.
lol one of these days Ill have a band and we'll make a Nirvana cover and call it "Smells Like Another Smells Like Teen Spirit Cover."

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