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Post subject: Shameless Self-Promotion
Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:27 pm
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Hey Loungers! Umm I don't post here very often, but I just recorded a new song and was looking for comments, criticism, etc. Thanks!
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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:26 pm
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I thought it was good. Full of emotion. Sounds like she tore you up pretty good. Most music is best with emotion behind it. I enjoyed it.

My only suggestion and this is strictly a personal preference, would be to slow it down a bit. Let the emotion come out in the melody as well as the lyrics. Just my opinion and I am by absolutely no means an expert.

But I did enjoy it and I thought your playing is very good.

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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:33 pm
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lets put it this way... if you were sellin id buy it haha. i really liked it especially how you went the complicated route instead of just using chords and the song itself actually has a real meaning. you dont come across too many songs like this. you got anymore? haha

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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:36 pm
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Pgkinder91 wrote:
i really liked it especially how you went the complicated route instead of just using chords and the song itself actually has a real meaning. you dont come across too many songs like this.



Yeah, the arpeggios were great!

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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:41 pm
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yea thats something ive yet to get used to its a great sound. and i wasnt lyin when i said id buy it cuz the more i listen to it the more i like it haha

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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 7:56 pm
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Thanks all! And you can download a high quality MP3 from my MySpace. It's free; I'm not trying to make any money or anything. I'll think about slowing it down. That's how I originally had it written, but every time I sit down to play it I wind up speeding it up.


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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:03 pm
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ur welcome man and uh haha i tried downloadin it but i couldnt figure it out if you could just point me in the right direction id be grateful haha

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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:12 pm
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That was pretty good. If that was on the radio, I'd keep it on (high complement). I'd say keep playing it the way you wrote it. I know that recording something make me more nervous and my speed increases (adrenalin), but the more you practice it the way you wrote it the easier it will come out. Looking forward to hearing more from you in the future.

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Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 8:22 pm
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Pgkinder91 wrote:
ur welcome man and uh haha i tried downloadin it but i couldnt figure it out if you could just point me in the right direction id be grateful haha


Darn, I'm having the same issue. Ever since MySpace updated their music player everything has been all weird. I'll try to figure it out.


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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:25 am
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Real nice song man! I don't get how people are able to play the guitar and sing at the same time... I really can't do that.
ah well.
anyway, if there is something you can improve, it's that you could lay more"pressure" on some words, while singing. but hey, that could just be me

nice work!

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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:05 pm
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Thanks all. I'll be posting another one later tonight. I'm mostly just posting this to ensure that I get my Sunday post in :D


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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:16 pm
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youll be posting another...? song? if so i cant wait to hear this one after the last one

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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:17 pm
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I liked it! It's really original. I think ,like above post, the song needs to be a little slower.


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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:17 pm
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Yea it's one I wrote last night. It's okay but the vocals kinda sound funny because I have a cold.


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Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:19 pm
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regardless im intrigued to see what it is haha

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